- The square images do not communicate the "S & J" clearly enough and can be read the wrong way
- The typeface used was really good
- Ensure the "with compliments" is more noticable & stand alone
Mango Creative:
- Make sure that the style carries through to all of the different stationary documentations
- Ensure the "with compliments" is more noticable & stand alone
Hoot Kidswear:
- The blue colour used in the background is crap!
- For the business details ensure that you don't use decorative typefaces - use clear legible typefaces for the contact details
- Ensure the "with compliments" is more noticable & stand alone
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